Bericht über klassenfahrt nach london

IsabellXD19 · Anmeldungsdatum: 05.04.2013 Beiträge: 1

Meine Frage:
hallo ich gehe in die regelschule in die 9. klasse wir müssen einen bericht über unsere klassenfahrt nach london schreiben ich weiß aber nicht ob ich grammatik und rechtschreibfehler in meinen bericht habe deshalb hoffe ich das ihr die falschen sachen berichtigen könnt ich bedanke mich im vorraus.

Meine Ideen:
We were in London from XX th of March to XX th of March. London is the capital of England and the UK.The drive began on xx th of March at 4 o' clock in the morning. We drove by bus. We drove through France,Belgium ,Netherlands and Germany. We were in Great Brittain 17 o'clock. We were drove by ship accross the English Channel. Then we drove by bus to London. We were arrived in London at 20 o'clock. Then the bus drove us to our bus stop.Our host family pick us up from the bus stop. On Monday drove the host family us to the bus stop and we got a lunch packet from our host family. We made a city tour and we had seen many sights from London for example Houses of Parliament, london Eye, Primark, Harrod's and so on. The sightseeing tour took a long time. Then we got divided into groups. My group had learned the underground drove. Then we met us at a certain point in time on the London Eye. The London Eye is on the river Thames. It was a 30 minutes slow moving ride. They had a good views over London.We saw many sights for example Westminster Bridge, Gherkin, Big Ben and Houses of Parliament and so on.Then we go back to our host family. On Tuesday we were at the Piccadilly Circus and the Tower Bridge. Then we went to the Natural History museum. The museum is free. We had free time after the museum. I and my group went to the Hyde Park. Hyde Park is one of the largest parks in central London, United Kingdom and one of the Royal Parks of London. Then we were in Harrods and in the Primark. Then we met us at the bus and drove to our host family. On Wednesday we went to Windsor Castle. There we had free time. We went to the shops which are near Windsor Castle. Then we drove back to the city and had free time again. I and my group went to the Oxford Street and the Trafalgar Square. Then we met at Piccadilly Circus. And then we went all to the musical. We watched the musical Thriller. Then we walked to our bus and drove to our host family. On Thursday morning we packed up our bags because we had to left the host family. Then drove the host family us to the bus stop. Then we said goodbye to our host family. Then we drove with the bus in the near the Madame Tussauds. Then we had free time. I and my group were in Regents Park. Then we all met at Madame Tussauds and went inside. There are many wax figures in Madame Tussauds for example Lady Gaga, Bruce Willis, Barack Obama, The Queen, David Beckham and so on. There is also a short movie in 4D. Then many wanted to go into the London Dungeon but we had no time for them. So we had 2 hours free time. Then we all met on the bus and drove back home. The ride took from 9 o'clock to 17 o'clock. The journey took 17 hours like the outward journey.

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