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 Verfasst am: 21. Apr 2007 08:47 Titel: Korrektur: Preface |
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hallo zusammen,
für meinen report muss ich auch ein vorwort verfassen, dass folgende vorgaben enthalten soll: information of the framework in which the report was written, brief explanation of the (sub)title, description of the target group (for whom the report has been written), acknowledgements.
ich bin mit meiner arbeit jedoch nicht so zufrieden, vor allem was einige formulierungen anbelangt.
wäre super, wenn jemand bereit wäre, mal drüberzuschauen und mir feedback zu geben.
The report “The Bahia Food and Drinks Bar - organic food as a bar concept” is written in the context of the subject PLA14.
In order to carry out a discussion, the first-year students of the FIHE Venlo arranged themselves in small groups. Every group discussed on a different topic. This report provides information about the case study of the “Bahia Food and Drinks Bar”. The findings and results are mainly based on the two discussions conducted during the lessons.
As it can be withdrawn from the title [hier wollte ich sagen: wie dem titel zu entnehmen ist], the report deals with the foundation of a bar. A concept of an organic food bar should be established and integrated successfully.
The target group of the report is our lecturer. He led the students through the PLA and will receive, correct and mark this report. Apart from that the students composed the report in order to achieve experience in writing professional reports.
I want to express my gratitude to my discussion group. We achieved good results which we could make use of in an appropriate way in the individual reports. The collaboration can be described as enjoyable; every member of the team was always anxious to support others with ideas and help.
Furthermore my acknowledgement to our lecturer, who familiarised us with the topic report writing as well as with other contents during the PLA. He was always motivated to provide us with useful hints and was responsive to our questions.
haltet ihr es für angemessen, beim aspekt "target group" neben dem dozenten auch noch einen selber zu nennen? ich war mir nicht sicher...
danke schonmal!
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